Date: 06/30/2012 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
I don't mind exposition at all. I like having material about the early days for the boys and how they became so close. Even with Jensen's abusive home life it wasn't a one way street. Jensen was also a strong support for Jared when he needed one.
Now, if Jensen will just decide that he needs Jared to share the room so he can sleep better......
But what on earth is happening over at fanfiction.net?
Author's Response: Apparently DV violated so kind of guideline....idk all i know is that the took my story down as well as a bunch of my favorite stories so I am just posting here and on LJ from now on :-) thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06/30/2012 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
Nice to find out about Jensen and Jared's back story...I think that Jared is going to have to make the first move, cause it sounds like Jensen will never get the hint! great update
Date: 06/13/2012 - 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
good story - like to see where it goes. hope to see more!31552
Date: 06/11/2012 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
It looks like the start of a wonderful vacation. But Jensen sure seems oblivious to the fact that his best friend is in love with him. He also seems to be pretty sure he's straight. Looking forward to how Jared changes his mind. :)
One thing you might consider is getting a beta reader. I'm finding several spelling and grammar errors that are slightly distracting.
Date: 06/11/2012 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh dear, I am so sorry about the illnesses and surgeries your family has been through. Top that with end of semester studies and work and I'm impressed you got around to doing this.
Loved the sleepy boys on the plane and rambling Jared.
Looking forward to seeing what this big surprise is!
Date: 06/08/2012 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hmm seems to be some animosity between Jensen & Chad. & seems Jensen needs to evaluate his feelings for Big Jay there. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 06/08/2012 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter 4
i like ! please kep going?! :)
Date: 05/25/2012 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great story! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 03/10/2012 - 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
JeezLouise! Jensen has really been through the wringer. Hope Jared never finds out about Jensen's well intentioned lie.
Got a kick out of a furious Jared terrifying seasoned agents.
(contemplates a cunning plan to log out and then post a whole slew of reviews under pseudonyms to stimulate the creative juices)
(or maybe chocolate bribes)
Author's Response: Hahahahaha! That was the best review yet! Definetely inspiring! New chap will be up soon!!!
Date: 03/09/2012 - 06:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Nice update! I really LOVE how protective Jared is. *giggling* Now they finaly is heading to the vacation, I look forward to seeing what will happen there. :D
Date: 03/08/2012 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
really enjoying this story, hurt Jensen, protective Jared..all good...