Reviewer: woostersgirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2012 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter One

So funny this, i lol'd so much. I often wondered what would happen if 2' true blue 'bottoms got 2gether what would happen.This seems plausible & " wicked funny ". Love the other guys and Dex. Jared and his Jaredness are addicting & well, Jensen,ummmm. Thanks.

Author's Response: I am so glad. I often re-read what I write a few days later and find myself laughing at my own stuff, so I'm tickled to know it translate to readers at times as funny. I know...you hit on exactly what i adored about this fic...always wanted to explore what would happen if two Bottoms tried to top one another. I loved introducing Dex to readers...he's actually real if you can believe it...

*Just copy-pasting something I sent another commentor...

hehehe...I swear I based Dex off this completely atrocious Infomercial where Men were being coaxed into buying HER this big-ass Bear...it looked awfully sexual what the sellers were asking, as the women they flounced on the bed with this poor bear were scantily clad in these baby doll nightgowns -- it was for Valentine's Day, BTW...I had a giggle before I had the epiphany for this fic...hehehe...

http://youtu.be/uojoBHjZohI

hehehe...i love it...Jared and his Jared-ness...and, oh, no need to expound on what arouses about Jensen...mmm-hmmm, indeed...you are so welcome...

much love...:O)

Reviewer: Cappy712 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2012 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter Four

OH man that was something else, loved it.

Author's Response: awww...I'm so glad to hear that, sweetie. Thanks for reading and leavin' me something to respond to...much love...:O)

Reviewer: Jolieblon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2012 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter Four

I hope you have plans for this couple. I can see more stories unfolding.
Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response: hehehe, in fact, I do have some plans -- tentative at best. And this is only because I hated that I ended it RIGHT at the sex, which would've been just a sensual and hot as the prior stuff...we shall see what my mind can come with next for J2 in this version of themselves. I can do so much with them, actually...much love...:O)

Reviewer: Jolieblon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2012 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Three

{Sadie and Oz got along better, and sooner}
Cuz puppehs is way smarter than peoples.

How funny that Jared is picking up organizational skills from Jensen.

{We could go to a breeder or a pet store.”}
NO! NOT a pet store! A rescue or a reputable breeder, yes, but not a pet store.

I like the way you're filling us in on some of the secondary characters.

Author's Response: Animals of any nature are smarter than the average bear [ human ]...hehehe, I love showing that Jared does conform a bit, in small subtle ways that Jensen never expected, which, of course, turns him on.

oh, god...I know. NEVER buy from a pet store. I have heard some atrocious stories from people who have bought from small pet stores -- yikes! Not even PetSmart or whatever that place is. I would much rather try my hand at a rescue pet or someone I know rather well who is in need of finding homes for the animals they can't care for. A breeder can get a bit foolish in pricing and how authentic the papers are.

I always like to make it important to show that J2 isn't going to be my only focus and that there can be and IS a world that revolves around them. Plus, minor characters allow me to stretch my character building skills a bit...as if they were original...

much love...:O)

Reviewer: Jolieblon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2012 - 11:58 am Title: Chapter Two

I am so enjoying this first time for the boys. Happy, uninhibited Jared and cautious, reserved Jensen exploring and learning about each other, and themselves. Love Dex and his story!
{“...don't judge me!”} giggle

Author's Response: I truly and genuinely loved exploring this first time for J2 in that they were BOTH Bottoms who wanted something more but were comfortable with what they had. Probably could've gone on longer with just being content with sharing their bodies, but "something" had to change or one of them would've gone bat-shit. I kind of see them being comfy in flip-flopping the relationship, but see...they both love cock so much and kind of want to fuck the other one, so it's like this confusing roundabout where in one single night it might just be them flipping consistently...

I loved Dex too. HE actually DOES exist...and here is how sad I am...and gives away how much of a insomniac I can be. Dex is real...and here is the sadness of how real he is...hehehe...I swear I based Dex off this completely atrocious Infomercial where Men were being coaxed into buying HER this big-ass Bear...it looked awfully sexual what the sellers were asking, as the women they flounced on the bed with this poor bear were scantily clad in these baby doll nightgowns -- it was for Valentine's Day, BTW...I had a giggle before I had the epiphany for this fic...hehehe...

http://youtu.be/uojoBHjZohI

much love...:O)

Reviewer: Jolieblon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2012 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter One

Oh dear, Jensen makes Felix Unger look like a slob.
But he does say 'sorry' so beautifully.

(goes off to fantasize about a Jensen massage)

Author's Response: hehehe...isn't it interesting that I had that image of "The Odd Couple" in my head, although Jared and Jensen aren't too much like their counterparts, as they are just themselves, but tinged to butt heads because of how they are. I don't know why but I always *picture* Jensen as a bit of a prude [ light ] and maybe a bit strict in some ways -- so it would truly shock me if he were like me in my private life, where I give off an aura of being prudish if not kind of anal about being a neat-freak...yet...get me alone and when I'm comfortable...I am so bad at keeping my own bedroom clean and...my mind always slips into the gutter.

gah...I always try to work massages into my fics. You should see what happens to me when I write those scenes. I always tingle in my back or however I explain how in-depth the massage goes...

much love...:O)

Reviewer: roswellfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2012 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter Three

Hi!

This chapter needs to be gone over again. You repeat a paragraph and then randomly switch into italics. If you beta the piece I bet you'll get more reviews! :)

Author's Response: hello...I appreciate the heads up. Problem has been fixed. I'm not looking for massive amounts of reviews, just want people who read J2 to enjoy a fic, but thanks for thinking of me...much love...:O)



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