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Reviewer: Jolieblon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

{“You’re hot” he announced.

Dean managed a weak grin “The whole world knows this.”}
Loved that.

One little comment. Their son, their lips. Not "there".

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the story, I've put the - there/theirs right, thanks.

Reviewer: NeutralDeviance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2009 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey! That was a pretty good story! I loved how Dean wasn't all schmoopy and girly. I hate that you ended it there, though, 'cause this story have gotten my bunnies to multiplying, like Sam and Dean's life with RJ, and them teaching him to hunt...GAH! anyway...lovely story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review I’m glad you enjoyed my story so much. I’m thinking of doing a sequel……

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