Date: 01/23/2015 - 06:55 pm Title: A Bright, Particular Star
I'm rereading this. It is such a touching Love Story that It Compelled me to read it again...
Date: 01/22/2015 - 02:49 pm Title: A Bright, Particular Star- Part 5
Bravo, I have enjoyed all 5 chapters. At times I was at the edge of my chair. Wouldn't it be a kick if in fact you could submit this as a screen play staring none other than J&J them selves. I would pay to see the movie as well as buying the DVD. You do not write for L.J. under the name of campo67 your writing style are very much alike. Not 1 typo or a word left out nothing. Just a very, very well written Love Story. I hated it to end would love to read more of your work. Again Bravo...
Date: 12/13/2010 - 11:34 pm Title: A Bright, Particular Star
This story! Should have many more great reviews. You did such a good job. I do have one question. Who was the girl that made Jensen leave? Was it explained and I missed it? I thought it might have been Sandra trying to get Jared back.
Date: 10/19/2010 - 02:16 am Title: A Bright, Particular Star
This is...WOW! There are AU's..then there are OH GOD WHAT?? AAAAAAUUUUUU's! The dialogue, the environment, the plot, it really sucks you in the world of Renaissance Europe! Inspired and intricately interwoven with acts such as Romeo & Juliet, this is just..wonderful. Very unique, distinct, and a piece to remember.
Author's Response: This may be my favorite bit of FB ever. :) We had so much fun writing this, and it was early in our joint writing, so we are quite proud of it. It's so nice to hear that people are still reading and enjoying this fic. Saklani
Date: 10/18/2009 - 01:13 am Title: A Bright, Particular Star- Part 5
TRULY VERY INSPIRING STORY. I loved this whole thing. I adored how you brought so much realism into their feeling which made reader feel their agony and love and happiness. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Author's Response: Why, thank you! This was a very early story of ours and is still one of our favorites. Thanks for reading and leaving FB. Saklani
Date: 10/12/2009 - 10:20 pm Title: A Bright, Particular Star- Part 3
I have not finished story but I just had to tell you how much, I am enjoying your story. You have put a lot into plot and dialogue and seems almost surreal in which it could almost mirror the world where the real Jared and Jensen are if they truly had these feeling for each other, how the pressure of public ( fans), and their love for their art ( acting) would interfere in their budding romance and love affair. You did excellent job so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely FB! This is one of our earliest and most favorite stories. Saklani