[Report This]Date: 05/28/2009 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Jared was able to forgive him and Sandy talked Mike into letting Jared talk to Jensen and oh geez. Beyond hott =]
But totally sad, Jared's speech could have killed me and Jensen begging him to stay *clutches heart* Poor boys =[
Author's Response: hehe, glad you liked the sex, but it's time for the angrty bit now, and I'm totally into it so hold on and stick with me for the time being ok, every cloud has a silver lining :D. thanks for taking the time to review :D, always apreciated.
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2009 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wonderful update!!! It's so sad that they can't be together. I was hoping that secretly Justin would be in love with a man he couldn't marry do to social ranking and would end up helping Jensen and Jensen would help him, but it sounds like Justin's looking forward to marrying Jensen. The rimming was totally hot. It almost makes up for the heartache.
This line made me laugh:
Jensen mewled when he felt Jared spill inside him, giving him ass he had and more.
I'm sure you meant all, but ass makes it funny.
I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: oops. I guess that's the risk of not having a beta I guess ;) thsnks for letting me know. I'll fix it asap. glad you liked the chapter,.. despite the heartbreak. thanks so much for the review
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2009 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
Heartbreaking stuff, a fantastic chapter. Those poor boys, will they be together again? Has Jeff given up? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: wow, thats so nice of you. five stars. glad you likes it
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 04:36 am Title: Chapter 8
That was a close call with Jen and Sandy, then Jared first reaction to Jensen presence - I so loved it, Then Jared reaction when he found about about Jensen the Prince - not sure If I agree with he's reaction; He may be hurt that he was lied to but he shouldn't react like that, reject Jensen that way.
He needs to apologize, pronto!
The King is an insensitive bastard.
The only good things is that Jen will marry Justin not that prick Jeff.
Update soon. Me wants to know what will happen next ;)
Author's Response: working on the next chappie, bringing Justin back and leaving Jeff be for a couple of chappies (he needs some time to come up with a new evil master plan), The King is exactly that... and dumb, and stupid and a jackass who needs to get his head out of his ass and let his son marry Jared..... but will he?. actually, I haven't even figured that one out... still working on the next arch of the story, so stay tuned. thanks so much for this great review... hope it didn't take you away from you project to long :P
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 7
That Jeff, what a bastard!
I hate him.
How could he do that to poor Jared?
He's such a bad influence on the King.
Sandy needs to tell Jensen what's going on.
Author's Response: I hate him too, but every story needs a vilain and he's such a sexy bastard :P. and the king.... well lets just say that he's one sandwich short of a picknick, ya know what I'm sayin *wink*
[Report This]Date: 05/25/2009 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh God... I'm glad to see the Jeff will no longer marry Jensen and Jared is alive but... oh no =[
Poor boys. This sucks majorly. I hope Jared can forgive him. But I won't be truly happy until they are together =[
Author's Response: hahah, no couldn't let jeff marry him :p, that would have been to nasty, even for only fiction, hahah. thanks for leaving a comment :D, it's always very much appreciated
[Report This]Date: 05/25/2009 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. Poor Jensen. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up.
Author's Response: :D, thanks so much
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2009 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
Why did Jared have to be such an idiot, he doesn't deserve Jensen's love if that's the way he's going to be. What is Jeff going to do next? Can't wait to read more, Thanks, top marks...
Author's Response: wow, thanks so much for the 5 stars :D, I'm thinking JAred's just a bit hur, confused and scared, so he's lashing out. thanks for taking the time to read and review :D
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2009 - 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful update!!! Jensen and Sandy were cutting close there, no pun intended It stinks that the truth was revealed like that. I loved that even face death, Jared was so concerned for Jensen and his safety. I hope that Jensen can make Jared understand. I bet that ass, Jeff. lied about Justin liking women. I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much for those kind words. glad that you enjoyed it
Date: 05/24/2009 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
LOL.. ok this is what I get for not reading the whole chapter summary. I say 'last chapter' and was like... last chapter already? So glad to see there's more to come.
Loved this chapter... so sad *tear*
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: nooo this is not the end. i have more in store for you
Date: 05/21/2009 - 02:49 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG!!! Will you kill me??? Why can you let ist end here? Bad - BAD - cliffi... *sigh*
Iīm so happy Sandy figured out who "Jen" really is and I hope she went to him to save Jared for the execution! Have I already said that this is a bad cliffi? *lol* Donīt let us wait so long... please...
Author's Response: haha, I usually don't do cliff's but I thought it wuold be fun to try, sorry :P. yeah, Sandy finaly figured it out, but will she be to late, hmmm, don't know yet what I'm going to let happen, but I'll let you know, ok :P, thanks for taking the time to read and review :D
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2009 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh no poor Jared and huury up Jensen, Jared needs you.
Author's Response: :D, thank you so much for the review :D
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2009 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh Yesh! Sandy figured it out! Tell me she went to Jensen!
Jeff is an evil, kiniving bastard =[
And I hate you for leaving this like that =[ You've never made such a big cliffhager, like EVER, I think.
Pleaseeeee hurry? =]
Author's Response: sorry, I didn't mean for it to be such a cliffhanger, you know, but I figured I could do it just this once.
you are right, Jeff is a huge asshole and to those questions, there will be an answer, jsut not right now :P. thanks for reading and reviewing, always love to hear what you think em :D
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2009 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh Yesh! Sandy figured it out! Tell me she went to Jensen!
Jeff is an evil, kiniving bastard =[
And I hate you for leaving this like that =[ You've never made such a big cliffhager, like EVER, I think.
Pleaseeeee hurry? =]
Author's Response: :D, so good you posted twice huh :P. thanks.
[Report This]Date: 05/20/2009 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
Does the King have to be such a complete moron, can Jensen save Jared from the headmans block? He doesn't have much time! Please update again soon.
Author's Response: he might be the King, but he's not the brightest crayon in the box, you're right about that :P. thanks for the review. I always like reading what you think about my stories, Babyreaper and I'm glad that you take the time to review them, so thanks :D