Date: 10/07/2013 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Final Post
a very very good story
i just watched a movie - itīs like that to me :)
i love big bangs XL, I hope you will write more in the next future
Date: 08/14/2013 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Final Post
I absolutely loved this story, to the point where I couldn't stop reading it and stayed up. It was so amazingly and beautifully written and had me in stitches and in tears.
One thing I will say is that, to be honest, I think having Jen kill off Jay's mother was out of character, and honestly kind of ruined the ending for me. It made it very hard to sympathise with Jensen. I think without that I would've rated the story at least a nine...
Apart from that I love it, and I would definitely recommend it to friends.
Date: 04/21/2013 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Final Post
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Date: 11/27/2012 - 06:40 am Title: Chapter 6
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Date: 11/27/2012 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 22
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Date: 11/26/2012 - 12:07 am Title: Chapter 4
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Date: 11/06/2012 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Final Post
What a fantastically detailed story, a true AU. I just really loved this. You kept me guessing though - I didn't expect that final twist.
Date: 11/02/2012 - 09:57 am Title: Chapter 23 - Final Post
Frankly, I was disgusted with the ending. You turned Jensen into a killer, who destroyed the family of Jared. And Jared? He just stood there, watching his father lost the family fortune, even though he had 5 billion in his name, so he could very well act as the gray knight, but he did not move a finger to help him. I know, his father killed Josh, but even so, Jared was very cold.
If my mother sold me to the journalists, for half a million ... well, I do not know what I would do. Maybe I stayed bewildered, but felt sorry for Sherill. I waited for Jared to seek to set things right with her, that is him to offer 50 million. Maybe then she would still be alive, without leaving the country, but with enough money to hire a good lawyer for the husband, or live his old age with dignity. Because, it is not a woman has no qualms, she has to pay with her life.
In the last chapters, you become pope Padalecki into bogeyman of the story, and no more Josh Holloway (including him in the story always makes me laugh. Imagine two dorks together, Jared and Josh. Lol). Rather I prefered that the suspect that the father Padalecki raised was true, it would be more plausible than putting all the blame on the parents.
Well, now that I blurted, I'll give the deserved credit for the fantastic story. Despite the unpleasant end, it is believable. I was thinking that instead of present-day New York, this was a medieval Italy, and instead of Padalecki, the name was Borgia, all this would be perfectly acceptable to the prevailing moral standards.
Now the good part: You not only write well, but also write in a way that we do not realize the author, I mean, we only see things happen before our eyes, just feel Jared interacting with Jensen. We do not realize clerical errors or language, you do not overlap the plot or the characters, and this is very good. I do not know if I made me clear, but the experience was the same of reading good books of good authors, or watching a good movie with a great storyline. Congrats!
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for your feedback and comments. I very rarely use this site anymore and have moved everything over to AO3, so I was really surprised to see a notification pop up for SD and for this story (which I haven't thought about in years, to be honest!). This story is definitely set in a dark and amoral world but in the "present". It was a challenge to give it a realistic feel, but SO many things are just utterly implausible, even in that fictional world! Haha. I think, as a writer, that was the fun part (if that makes sense). Thanks for reading the story and for the feedback. If I could go back and write this story again, I would make character and plot adjustments. Hopefully, my storytelling has improved since I first wrote this! :)
Date: 10/09/2012 - 04:06 am Title: Chapter 22
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Date: 10/09/2012 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter 11
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Date: 08/23/2012 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Final Post
I love this fic. I have to say I was shocked to see a Jensen who would arrange a murder, but his reasoning, in this story's context, was understandable. Excellent fic, hon.