Date: 11/30/2008 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
You know what? I like this. This scene is quite evocative, and in so few words. I could picture the room, Sam, Dean's posture and eyes, and maybe even that look on Sam's face when he decided he didn't care. I'm impressed that you got to the heart of the moment using such an economy of language. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was my first Supernatural fic, so I consider it my baby. I'm glad you liked it.