Date: 01/05/2008 - 07:13 pm Title: Accept It
ok for some strange reason, i read this a while ago but forgot to review. SO here I am, telling you that i simply love this fic, it's hot and sweet and I hope you write lots more!!~
Author's Response: yay! I'm so glad you liked it. I'll try to write more... but it doesn't look too good at the moment... Oh well. Thanks for reviewing this time!
Date: 09/05/2007 - 05:05 pm Title: Accept It
MWAHAHAHA....I LOVED IT!!!
Author's Response: YAYS *does little happy dance*
Date: 07/16/2007 - 07:23 am Title: Accept It
OMG!!! That was beautiful! The first story that's actually made me cry, I absolutely loved it!
Author's Response: o.O I'm glad it was an emotional experience for you. Thanks for reading, and reviewing... I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 07/15/2007 - 04:59 pm Title: Accept It
Oh sweetheart, I could never kill you. Mostly because then I would never be able to read another fic by you again. I loved loved loved it!
I couldn't stop thinking to myself how amazingly well done and put together that was. Most importantly how freaking hot it was from beginning to end. It was a bit angstier than I'm used to, but not in a bad way at all.
I just felt so connected and in love with this fic I couldn't stop reading it.
If he didn’t, he would walk in front of the next bus he saw, and hope the driver didn’t see him until it was too late. That made my heart wrench, and not a lot of people can do that. It captured in the best way possible how Jared was feeling at that moment and honestly you couldn't have made it more perfect.
My only suggestion to you is to add some spaces in between paragraphs. Often times when it's it's just line after line the story can begin to feel a little overwhelming. Other than that, your diction and grammar are immaculate and I can't wait to see what you are going to do next.
Author's Response: O.o I'm SOOO glad you liked it! Sorry about the spaces... and the long lines... I just realised that it IS very long... maybe I should change that... yeah... I should... Thank You for your suggestion... I shall definitely change the spaces.rnThanks so much for reviewing! I appreciate it! And all of your compliments... THANK YOU!!!rn(And thanks for not wanting to kill me. I was kind of worried that people would hate me for this.) Okay, now the spaces are there... hopefully, and I just have to say that I'm so (i don't know how to say it so that it doesn't sound sarcastic... ) so... happy... and pleased... and estatic that you noticed the grammar... I try... *tears up* Thank you! (I realize that I keep saying this, but I really mean it!)rnthattangledweb