Date: 01/08/2012 - 03:56 pm Title: Psyched
Great story so far. I want to tell you that you are using a wrong word. You had two large bowels of soup when the word should be bowl. A bowel is your intestines. It gave me a laugh. I am not trying to insult you. I really like your writing.
Author's Response: yea..i noticed that awhile back :) i was writing really fast in a short period of time and forgot to fix it *oops* <3 but im glad that you like it!
Date: 04/22/2011 - 10:07 pm Title: Forbidden
Great story. One note though, in this chapter you are using the word bowel instead of bowl. Bowel is the intestines.
Author's Response: oops :P sorry...typing fast
Date: 04/21/2011 - 03:26 pm Title: Forbidden
This is great so far. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks so much :) I'm glad you like it <3