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Reviewer: Jolieblon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2012 - 06:48 pm Title: Forbidden

{Dean came around the corner, Dad’s bowel in hand}
Thought for a minute there Dean had been possessed again and killed John. ;)

Reviewer: Sue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 - 03:56 pm Title: Psyched

Great story so far. I want to tell you that you are using a wrong word. You had two large bowels of soup when the word should be bowl. A bowel is your intestines. It gave me a laugh. I am not trying to insult you. I really like your writing.

Author's Response: yea..i noticed that awhile back :) i was writing really fast in a short period of time and forgot to fix it *oops* <3 but im glad that you like it!

Reviewer: Jolieblon Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 - 03:12 pm Title: Forbidden

So what's the deal with Sam? He didn't choose to stay stuck to the ceiling, did he?

Sure hope that last section was another dream.

Reviewer: Jolieblon Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 - 03:05 pm Title: Forbidden

Hope those demons are content to just insult John for a while. A long while.

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Date: 04/30/2011 - 02:49 pm Title: Forbidden

Hope Sam remembers why the room looked familiar in time to save John.

And what happened when Sam was thirteen?

Author's Response: I'll explain things a bit more in another story.. :)

Reviewer: Jolieblon Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 - 02:07 pm Title: Forbidden

Good start. Makes me want to read more.

Reviewer: Who me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2011 - 10:07 pm Title: Forbidden

Great story. One note though, in this chapter you are using the word bowel instead of bowl. Bowel is the intestines.

Author's Response: oops :P sorry...typing fast

Reviewer: writinginsecret Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2011 - 09:09 am Title: Forbidden

Wow that was a whirlwind!

Author's Response: good i hope? :)

Reviewer: writinginsecret Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2011 - 09:01 am Title: Forbidden

No disappointment here! Like leather and orange and coffee, an intoxicating blend to me . . . mmmm, sounds good to me.

Author's Response: it does doesn't it ;)

Reviewer: Rosie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2011 - 03:26 pm Title: Forbidden

This is great so far. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thanks so much :) I'm glad you like it <3

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