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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2013 - 01:01 pm Title: Long Way To Happy

Even good friends can over step. I did that back in high school. Told the asswipe my friend had started dating my thoughts on the subject and he better not hurt her. Next thing I get an irate friend on my doorstep who then doesn't speak to me for two months.

Author's Response: ... i had a similar thing,only my friend was mad cause i always said the opposite of what she said about her bf... like if she was all lovey i was hateful and reminded her of what she didn't like and vice versa.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2013 - 12:58 pm Title: Long Way To Happy

I'm getting worried about the level of 'involvement' the girls have.

Author's Response: me too... which is kind of horrible of me cause i was the girls in highschool...

Reviewer: demongirl Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2013 - 05:06 am Title: Long Way To Happy

i no sophia doing it because she care but jen got to make is own mistakes

Reviewer: daibhi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2013 - 07:04 pm Title: Split Personality V2

Well, thanks for the alter-ending, this is going in a unique direction. SUPER J, oh this is a great one, it makes me wonder just how many hidden alters Jared does have!

Author's Response: No problem? It will be a bit before i have the next one up because i have to figure out a lot of stuff. like V1 i had the ending in mind from the start, this one, not so much...

Reviewer: daibhi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2013 - 06:26 pm Title: Split Personality V2

It more than makes up for the other ending. I know it's hard to revisit a story, I've done it dozens of time and done more rewrites before I felt comfortable enough to let it go. I guess I'm just insecure that way. But this is running good, on par with the storyline you generated in v1, but taking a different road with the same drama.

Author's Response: honestly i've tried the many many rewrite thing, but then i never post.. now i just post and hope its not horribly horrible, i guess. Thank you so much! i will try my best to meet your expectations :D

Reviewer: Kittenseal Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2013 - 03:30 pm Title: Long Way To Happy

Okay, this was freakin' awesome! I love protective and scary Sophia and sweet but tough Jensen and cute Jared and all the others. They seriously rock! I can't wait until the next chapter! Ta!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2013 - 02:37 pm Title: Long Way To Happy

That girl scares ME. Good for Jared to brave the gauntlet. And he will find a way to please them all. No matter what they throw at him he will prove his awesomeness and worthiness. :)

Author's Response: lol definitely... but it may take a few trys...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2013 - 10:17 pm Title: Long Way To Happy

That's okay. Jared will fix him.

Author's Response: yeah. but he's gunna need ten pounds of super glue and sophia not to kill him...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2013 - 11:14 am Title: Long Way To Happy

Jared and chocolate....mmmmmmmm.
My hormones are rockin'.

Author's Response: LOL! naughty thoughts! :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2013 - 02:26 pm Title: Long Way To Happy

The darkness before the dawn, which is Jared... .:)

Author's Response: Yep! just got the next one posted and it has the floppy haired wonder boy in it! :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2013 - 02:00 pm Title: Long Way To Happy

Is revengers remorse like buyers remose? Perhaps another reason it is a dish best served cold.....
(But I'm still happy they whumped JDM)

Author's Response: I think so and definitely best served cold, with a side of angsty sauce.

Reviewer: Sandycub Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2013 - 10:37 pm Title: Long Way To Happy

Really good chapter!! The last two have been just wonderful! Poor Jensen, he was just really starting to feel happy and then he felt that he needed to confess. I hope that Sophia is able to help things feel better. I am going to have to go back and reread - I don't remember why Amy is in jail...

Author's Response: causing a riot, mostly... and thank you so much. Im glad that they haven't flopped! Jared'll be in soon, so it'll be more angst and rollercoastery for a while... but good rollercoasty... hopefully.

Reviewer: dmartins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2013 - 10:48 am Title: Long Way To Happy

When will we meet Jared in this story?

Author's Response: probably four chapters at most... sorry its taking so long, but it is called long way to happy lol.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2013 - 10:27 am Title: Long Way To Happy

Sophia rocks.
We've had a rash of RL teacher/student things lately, which is bad bad bad. But then you had to toss Mr. Winchester in there! Now my circuits are fried. LoL

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2013 - 10:15 am Title: Long Way To Happy

Love the pile on head smacking.....true friends.

Author's Response: lol... violence is how you can tell a friend from a bestie! :D

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