Date: 06/06/2015 - 03:34 pm Title: Purity
"Finding himself alone in bed when he woke up felt foreign and proved that Jared's instinct to keep his feelings secret had been wrong. He should have answered with the words that were on the tip of his tongue."
"He swallowed, "what did I do wrong? I feel like I was on the right track and then - somewhere things changed.""
I had a really hard time with this chapter. I love the story so far, but Jared was very very aware of his decision to ignore Jensen's confession. The following emotional confusion was not a believable read because he'd already identified the problem. I couldn't make it past the dinner scene where he said he didn't know why Jensen pulled away. They kissed, but it wasn't a new discovery so I found the conversation dishonest and frustrating. I couldn't get past Jared knowing the problem, but supposedly unaware of why Jensen would pull away. I couldn't really appreciate their mutual confessions or them breaking the rules.
Date: 12/06/2014 - 12:20 am Title: Purity 2
( Ala Jensen ) Can we get this flavor at local ice cream shops????
Date: 12/05/2014 - 02:37 pm Title: Purity
Okay so now I'm dying hoping that Jensen will not be taken away from Jared and punished!!! Please say everything will work out okay!
Date: 12/05/2014 - 11:50 am Title: Purity
WOW WOW WOW!!!!!! Yeah!!!!
I love your style of writing !
Date: 07/05/2014 - 12:06 am Title: Purity
Wow, I can't believe this isn't a movie yet, (preferably with Jensen and Jared playing the leads lol). Your writing is so beautiful and detailed, I love it. The story is so dynamic giving you a sense for what the characters are feeling, and I love the sweet little moments the main characters share.
Date: 03/31/2013 - 09:03 pm Title: Purity
So... That was just... Simply amazing. Why I haven't read it before I've got no clue, but just... Amazing. The plot alone drew me in, everything about it was keeping me completely interested. & As for the sex? Impossibly hot. Honestly, this was an amazing read & I simply couldn't stop till the end! Bravo:3
Author's Response: thanks you SO much :D
Date: 03/27/2013 - 01:57 am Title: Purity
That was insanely beautiful...and hot! I adored the rings, what a perfect way for Jensen to remember where he's been and where he ends up. Beautifully written! Amazing! :) I completely adored this story...couldn't put it down!
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D