Date: 12/29/2008 - 01:19 am Title: Through Dangers Untold
At first I had been panicing that you'd use the "Lie to me" scene from the last episode of Angel.
I think that would have destroyed me.
This was a good ending but you should think of doing a sequel.
Illyria is so funny I think any conversation with her and Dean could be hilarious.
Maybe you should consider turning this into a full blown crossover with Buffy/Angel.
Getting Dean, Spike and Angel into a conversation would be side-splitting!
I's love to read that.
It would be cool if Dean felt a weird connection to Buffy because they had both died then Sam, Spike and Angel could get jealous and go out and get drunk.
Maybe even bring Ed Zeddmore and Harry Spangler from HellHoundsLair.com in to meet Andrew. Those three plus Sam and Xander would be so funny having a geekboy moment.
And there could be so many (none-offensive) gay jokes if you had Dean/Sam and Willow/Kennedy in a room together.
Also if you imagined the attidue of Blind!Giles from "Something Blue" bitching about everyone with John and Bobby.
And just thing of all the Mini-Hero attitude you could have if Jo and Dawn were there and didn't like each other, maybe 'cause they both fancied Dean. Or 'cause Jo liked Dean and Dawn liked Sam and they argued over who waas cooler. Then you could have Xander with more "She liked me first" comments.
I know I'm not giving you and real story line here just many funny moments but I think for the Big Bad of the episode you should have a Demon that played on emotions. Getting everyone to revel feelings they'd hidden. Kind of like Asylem meets Once More With Feeling just no homicide or singing. Someone will have to be kidnapped by the Demon, maybe Sam and Xander and Dawn, people important enough from each group to make everyone worried sick and angry but not vital enough to the hunt itself to make saving people harder without their skills.
Maybe even seperate everyone using their deepest fears like in Fear. I don't what Demon it could be though. It would have to be worse than YED, The First and The Senior Partners put together.
Charmed might actually be pretty could insperation for trying to find a baddy. You couldn't use the Deadly Sins again or an official demon of fear but maybe look at Hex just make the fallen Angels scarier.
I think I've given you enough to think about if you're actually taking me seriously XD
If you do decide to write this then please contact me for more ideas.
Date: 12/02/2008 - 11:07 am Title: Through Dangers Untold
So, Wincest isn't my thing, but when I read the summary and saw these were based on For Your Eyes Only and Illyria, well I just had to read it and I wasn't disappointed.
This was brilliant. The emotions were really raw and real, I could feel them along side them.
Illyria was brilliant, I love how he acted and the way he spoke and the confusion he felt when humanity started to catch up with him.
Really great couple of stories, loved them. :D