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A/N: Hi. This is CRACK. :D

Jared moaned loudly, biting down on his lip with perfect white teeth as his teacher engulfed his entire cock into his wide, wet mouth.

"Come on baby, please, swallow me down like you mean it," Jared says. His voice broke like he was back in middle school again or something. The short-haired man laughed and grazed his teeth along the younger man's turgid flesh, biting down gently until Jared screams with pleasure.

"are you going to let me fuck you, Jared?" Jensen asked around Jared's erection as he swallowed and sucked and twisted his mouth. The schoolboy panted wildly and his hands were everywhere and he was going to cum any minute, but he wanted the older man to fuck him first, just shove his dick up his ass right now without any lube or anything.


Jared blinked. This was... this was quite possibly the most intriguing thing he had ever discovered. He recognized Sandy's writing straight off; the way she put little hearts on top of her i's, and the scented pens she used. But why... why on earth was Sandy writing really bad stories featuring himself and Jensen?

Revenge was quite possibly in order.

When he showed Jensen later on, Jensen didn't seem to know whether to laugh or cry.

"That's ... Jesus Christ, I better talk to Mike - I think Sandy needs to go on a creative writing course. This stuff will never sell."

Jared burst out laughing.

The next day, Sandy came up to him in the corridor, looking somewhat worried. "Uh. Jared? Did you, um, happen to pick up something out of my notebook yesterday? I think I dropped it." She was blushing bright red, clutching her books to her chest protectively, looking like she was both hoping Jared had found it and hoping he hadn't.

"Oh, you mean this?" Jared casually took a piece of paper out of his bag and handed it to Sandy, throwing her a wink before heading off to his next class. Sandy felt like her face was going to catch fire, she was blushing so much. Really, she did NOT need Jared to know what she daydreamed about during class. Bit late now, though...

Later, she locked herself in a cubicle in the girl's bathroom and pulled out her notebook to continue with her story. All her friends on Myspace would love this latest installment...

Her mouth fell open and she gasped loudly when she saw what Jared had given her back.

Jared moaned loudly, biting down on his lip with perfect white teeth as his teacher engulfed his entire cock into his wide, wet mouth. (Perfect white teeth - far too flowery. Take that bit out. Also, 'wide, wet mouth' isn't very good either. Try to find better words.)

"Come on baby, please, swallow me down like you mean it," Jared says said. (You changed tense there. Very confusing - don't do it!) His voice broke like he was back in middle school again or something. ("Or something" does not go well in this sort of story.) The short-haired man (Dear God, save me from epithets! Nothing wrong with using someone's name three times in a sentence if you can avoid this sort of thing) laughed and grazed his teeth along the younger man's turgid flesh (I recommend using 'cock' or 'dick', never 'turgid flesh' or anything else quite so bad-porn sounding), biting down gently until Jared screams screamed (again with the changing tense. Choose a tense and stick to it.) with pleasure. (Have you ever had your cock bitten? No? I wouldn't recommend it. Unless you're into that sort of thing, which by the way I'm not, it would result in screaming with pain, not pleasure.)

"are (Capital letter please!) you going to let me fuck you, Jared?" Jensen asked around Jared's erection as he swallowed and sucked and twisted his mouth. The schoolboy (NAME PLEASE!) panted wildly and his hands were everywhere and he was going to cum (use 'come'... 'cum' just looks awful. Seriously.) any minute, but he wanted the older man (RAWR!) to fuck him first, just shove his dick up his ass right now without any lube or anything. (OUCH. Oh god. OUCH. Please, please, please, when you are writing gay porn, never forget the lube. If you can't find lube, use lots and lots of spit and a rimming first if possible.)


Sandy crumpled up the paper and shoved it back into her bag. Someone was going to die for this.

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